Many of the melodies and beats are well constructed and fit together well, however I found there was a bit of an issue with transitions and variety. It was easy to listen to for the first minute and a half to two minutes, but after that I found I started to get a bit bored.
This is a huge improvement from your first song, and without a doubt if you keep it up I'm sure a scout will be due sometime soon.
Actually i'm working on a fixed version of this using some loops.I think it'll be done within a week :)
I'm really not a fan of rap, but I have to say, this is pretty damn good. Props to you for making me enjoy a song from a genre I've never enjoyed before.
That means so much man that's why I make music to me rap is rhythm n poetry! Thanks for listening!
I kind of had the same feeling as MelodyPadControlUnit, but I was pleasantly surprised with both how it looped so well, and that it was such a chill easy to listen to song. My only complaint is that the song seemed to be rather short, not allowing it to have a climax. Still good regardless. Great job!
Thank you for your comment, glad you enjoyed.
I feel like this song was structured right as a boss battle/special enemy fight in an 8bit game, however, the actual melodies seemed to be lacking.
Lacking what, and why is that important enough to warrant 3 stars being taken away? I can't use your review to improve my music, or use it in any way in it's current state.
Sounds pretty good man. It's got a very smooth and relaxing sound to it, which is easy to sit back and enjoy while doing something else. The acoustic guitar sounded very crisp and clean...(no caffeine).
One of my only complaints is both the sound of the toms and the snare. With the toms, it just sounded a little bit too boomy and loud for such a soft song. And with the snare, I think it needs a little bit more of a "pop" to it, some more power. But overall it's a very well structured song.
Thanks. The toms stand out, so that they still are powerful when vocals are put on top.
I don't really want the snare to be more powerful than it already is, though.
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Sounds pretty cool man. I like how you made the lead sound wavy and ominous. I could totally see myself stalking through a haunted castle or something to this
Sounds pretty good man! I'm not a big fan of dubstep, but you make it sound pretty damned good.
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