Many of the melodies and beats are well constructed and fit together well, however I found there was a bit of an issue with transitions and variety. It was easy to listen to for the first minute and a half to two minutes, but after that I found I started to get a bit bored.
This is a huge improvement from your first song, and without a doubt if you keep it up I'm sure a scout will be due sometime soon.
3.5/5
Actually i'm working on a fixed version of this using some loops.I think it'll be done within a week :)
I'm really not a fan of rap, but I have to say, this is pretty damn good. Props to you for making me enjoy a song from a genre I've never enjoyed before.
That means so much man that's why I make music to me rap is rhythm n poetry! Thanks for listening!
I feel like this song was structured right as a boss battle/special enemy fight in an 8bit game, however, the actual melodies seemed to be lacking.
Lacking what, and why is that important enough to warrant 3 stars being taken away? I can't use your review to improve my music, or use it in any way in it's current state.
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